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Mark Rico's avatar

This perfectly captures the sense of epic timelessness in those few remaining old-growth redwood enclaves. Feels just like Muir woods did when I spent time there.

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Evelyn Mow's avatar

Reading this was truly a stimulating experience in the best sense! The artwork is wonderful, to start with—and the way you’ve woven in the echoes of many voices from the poetic tradition is such a perfect evocation of the self-regenerative forest-- or Nature as the "Heraclitean Fire."

I loved the Miltonic appeal to the Muse, loved the Dylan Thomas references-- “The Force that Through the Green Fuse” is one of my all-time favorites. The imagery of the “midwifing shore” recalled Thomas’ “Heron-priested shore,” and also, at least in my mind, was a beautiful counterpoint to Hopkins' “widowmaking, unchilding, unfathering deeps”-- 

Recently I re-read Tintern Abbey, and I found that same tone here, of passionate feeling for a well-loved landscape. The image of the fog as a heroic Titan was a fabulous reminder of (and contrast to) Sandburg’s fog that walks on little cat feet.

Also, I was wondering if you borrowed— if not ideas then at least atmosphere?— from either The Living by Annie Dillard, or The Hidden Life of Trees by Peter Wohlleben?

I may have supplied some of my own allusions here but felt there was a beautiful braiding of “Tradition and Individual Talent” in this piece. Thank you for sharing, and I’m looking forward to further installments!

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